This page was A bit annoying to make since I split panel 2 and 5 into 2 separate panels midway through creation, overall I liked how this page turned out.
I like the movement/transition through these panels. You’ve done this really well through shifts in posture of your main character to suggest mobility. Excellent!
You’ve done a great job in extending the storyline by introducing another character
Panel 2 – don’t forget to start with a capital letter ‘Well no point….’
Panel 5 – don’t forget to start with a capital letter ‘Maybe…’
